Silence Comes Before The Kill

• Artist: dunteatcatz
• Description: This is a song I wrote because I got an idea. There is a story meaning behind it, but I'll let you interpret it as you will!
  
  Please comment, constructive criticism is much appreciated! :D
• Date: 08/24/2009
• Tags: silence comes before kill

Are you even listening,
To the silence that once was,
The beating of those,
Infernal malfunctioning
Memories that just wouldn't close?

Silence yes, but don't you know,
Silence comes before the kill.
The treating of your,
broken wounds, the way that you're
going will surely leave you dead.

I don't want it back, so why do I feel I need it?
I don't want you back, your pleas turn into silence.

Struggling to turn them off,
But they're turned on by you.
They won't stop,
Drop the hero, act come with me
Let the pulsing memories go

Don't you ever spill your blood,
For the red eyed mirage.
Don't look back, hold on my friend
Until the silence fills the air

I don't want it back, so why do I feel I need it?
I don't want you back, your pleas turn into silence.

Raise your sword.
Stare it down.
It can only be tame if it's destroyed.

Kill for peace of mind,
Forget the will to find,
A way to see the other end,
Turn back around and send,
them to their graves.

I don't want it back, so why do I feel I need it?
I don't want you back, your pleas turn into silence.
And silence comes before the kill.

Silence comes before the kill.
Silence comes before the kill.
Silence comes before the kill.

Comments

[ProfessorKC]

Needs focus badly. You start with images that are quite effective and leave off to ramble about. Lots of incomplete thoughts in the center and you could probably cut out most of it.

Focus on the idea of "Silence comes before the kill" think about all the different things this could mean: the silence or lack of feeling before a murder. the dispassionate way a hunter kills for food, the deep breath and silence inside us when we choke down our own feelings. Keep it Simple!