Beauty

• Artist: Lieutenant_Sauter
• Description: lol
• Date: 08/24/2009
• Tags: beauty

Beauty
Beauty isn't about how you look, how perfect your skin is.
Or even how perfect your hair is, or whatever most find in beauty.
Beauty is what's inside.
How that peron treats others.
Kindness is beauty.
Outside, they can look like crap.
But if their inside treats you with kindness and caring.
Then looks doesn't matter.

Comments

[Faerie]

I see where you're going with this poem...
But you need to emphasize and put more detail..
Make it flow nicely and let the words blend and create a harmonic melody within your poem.
Other than that, great start smile

[Fake Silence]

Short but nice enough.
Still, it could have been nicer if you said more about beauty
than what people would already know without anyone saying it.
Keep it up.