haiku

• Artist: Zsadist659
• Description: haiku i wrote
• Date: 08/25/2009
• Tags: hiku

The forest hids the sun but cant keep back the rain, Just like the past i wish i won but i couldnt stop the pain.

Comments

[Myrtus No Galium]

Isn't Haiku
5
7
5?
A short and nice poem, but not sure what to exactly consider it as o.o

[MidnightIRONblack]

Pretty good Haiku!!!!! biggrin Though shouldn't it be hides instead of hids??