- y life y so long its just a dissapointment just so wrong wish i could leave but trapped under sorrow and despare just take me now just dare, like a flower in the midnight air to dark to find its beauty never seen was it even suppose to be here.
- by ninjaturtle09 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/30/2009 |
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- Title: lifes just a dissapointment
- Artist: ninjaturtle09
- Description: y life
- Date: 08/30/2009
- Tags: lifes just dissapointment
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- bassmaster_awesome - 09/04/2009
- Heart felt, but bland and hard to read, format your text more even if it means seperating it with a gap, it will show stronger writting skills and help you to judge the quality of your own work.
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