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I hold back tears
that wish to seep out
as I watch him walk away.
As he nears his car, I start to pout
Then all my pain comes crashing out.
My tears are like rain hitting my skin,
they are warm to the touch, unlike my frozen heart.
It was all my fault
that he walked down the drive
to leave me here
to try to say alive.
He looks back at me
and I turn away, not knowing what to say.
I fall to the floor
ravaged by anger and pain.
My pain became cries
as my heart slowly dies.
He will be happy, and I,
I will be in pain
living with the awful memory
of his back in the rain...
- Title: Rain
- Artist: EvilEmkay
- Description: My boyfriend broke up with me when i wrote this. I was in tears not paying attention to what i wrote and this is what came out.
- Date: 09/06/2009
- Tags: rain
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Comments (4 Comments)
- bassmaster_awesome - 09/06/2009
- this is good, and i like it. But it is not my cup of tea so I won't bring your score down, and actually rate. 4/5 but only in my opinion.
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- Bjorking - 09/06/2009
- really sad but it was graet 5/5
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- Emo Nalgas - 09/06/2009
- Very good... I really like it. 5/5
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- iiCooffins - 09/06/2009
- this is very good it kind of made me sad but i really like it 5/5
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