voice

• Artist: o0OKatO0o
• Description: the little voice inside your head that talks to you
• Date: 09/12/2009
• Tags: voice

You know that’s not true
he’s lying to you
I’m the only one
who will always stay true
you know you can’t trust you
so just put your trust in me
You know what
he’ll do to you
he’ll hurt you just like he use to
put your trust in me
for I’ll always
be here for you
I’ll always be true
and I will never lie
To you.

Comments

[Wordshaker]

very good,

[o0OKatO0o]

sorry, i didnt meen to, thanks for the advice ill look for that in future poetry i write

[Conversate]

You used "true" too much in it.
I know you needed to rhyme and all, but try not to use the same words repeatedly.