Tearing Us Apart

• Artist: DDrox316
• Description: something i thought of... kinda like rapunzel?
  The first line in the last stanza was changed from "Yes, yes... God, yes!" on Dec 27, 2009
• Date: 09/20/2009
• Tags: tearing apart

I try to escape you
But you’re always there
I try to run away
But I’m too scared
You are always haunting me
There’s no place I can turn
I want to be free of you
Oh, my pain-it burns
I can’t escape,
I can’t run away,
You have me trapped
I’m here to stay

You torture me
You hold me close to you
But you’re not the one I want
If you knew...
If you knew about
How trapped I feel
You would keep me locked up forever...
My heart would never heal </3

I know he’s out there somewhere
Wondering where I could be
He cries himself to sleep
Because... he’s lost me
I’ve been taken,
I’ve been stolen...
And I know somewhere out there
His heart is breaking and swollen </3

I can’t be afraid anymore
I can’t I can’t I won’t be
I’ll do whatever it takes
To be free
“It won’t be easy”
He tells me
"You must find the door,
And you must find the key."

For days and nights,
I search and search and search
For weeks and weeks,
I search and search and search
Where could it be?
I’ll never find it
What would I do,
Where would I hide it?

Then I realize it’s been with me
All along
It’s the key on my necklace
The one he gave me... I’ve been trapped so long

I find the door
And turn the key
I step out of this prison
And... I’ve set myself free

All that time,
I wished to be free
All that time,
The answer was with me

I run to find him
To let him know
I’m safe...
He cries, he won’t ever let me go
“It’s been so long
I’ve been hidden, scared and alone
But during the time I was away
My love for you has grown”

“Instead of
Tearing us apart...
It made me feel lost
It didn’t tear me, it tore my heart” </3

“You’re okay now,
You’re safe, with me
I’ll love you forever, but first...
Will you marry me?”

“Oh, honey! Yes!
I love you too.
I don’t care what happens...
As long as I’m with you” <33

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

It reminds me of Taylor Swift's "love story" ... But it's much better than it wink You're a really talented writer, y'know smile

[F a t a l D e c o d e]

I think the idea is great and the words were well chosen. I think you could work on the rhythm, but overall it was good ^__^

[xX_emo girl18_Xx]

ok wow its awesome i like it soooooooooo much keep on making good things ^^ 5/5