I Feel

• Artist: PoeticDarkAngel
• Description: A very old poem from a depressed time. Found it in my trove. Hope you like.
• Date: 09/23/2009
• Tags: feel

I feel like im drowning
Everything around me is downing me
Can't see a reason for me to be
I see a sea
And jump in but not even death will accept me
I sink deeper wordering when my last breath'll be

I feel like crying
But mye eye is dry
Dont know why
Maybe its too late for me cry
Too late to say bye
Too late to tell them not to cry
I sink deeper wondering when will I die

I feel rage
But my rage turn to pain
Driving me insane
Im on the road to suicide lane
But Im blinded by the rain

But still see a sea
And jump in but not even death will except me
So I wait
Patiently waitin at deaths gate

Comments

[Animeplay99]

songs are poems! This would be a good song. All you have to do is add more to it, get a band, find a good tune. I'd say hard rock, but I'm not an expert. xD 4/5