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• Artist: Countess Aracelli
• Description: A song I wrote in my head because I myself cannot read/write music. I'm looking for constructive criticism.
• Date: 09/27/2009
• Tags: colors black blue white

Black on blue; red on white
This is how I am doing tonight.
I'm a racontuer, you're out of sight
I just want to know you know this is right.

I fought hard and I fought long
To bring you a message and a simple song
Turns out, the message and song are one in the same
I want you to know I'm one special dame.

Black on blue; red on white
This is how I feel tonight.
Black on blue; red on white
It's the simple rhyme I'm gonna recite.
Black on blue; red on white
To tell you that I'm feeling contrite.

I can't trust anybody a great deal
Until I wait for a couple wounds to heal
One in my brain and the one in your lip
I can feel the record starting to skip.

Black on blue; red on white
These are the things that I thought were right.
Black on blue; red on white
Today is the day I'm feeling alright.

Comments

[Mrs_Vengeance_A7x]

This is really good, i like it.