Wisdom.. Sweet Wisdom.

• Artist: Shin_Ru
• Description: This is a poem, about wisdom.
  Not many have it.. Not true wisdom.
  What is true wisdom? Do we even know?
  This is my first poem, ever written. And on behalf of a friend, I entered it into this arena.
  Otherwise, you lovely people may never have seen this.
  I want to know what is thought on this.
  
• Date: 09/28/2009
• Tags: wisdom sweet wisdom

Infinite mystery binds the wise.
They seek it thus, and bind, amongst.
Gifts Infinite Wisdom, to chosen few.
Few seek that wisdom, yet none bind.
Though the morrow barren, nothing shall forestall return.
For whence came, return inevitable.
Cherish wisdom garnered, above wisdom thought.

Wisdom.
Above all, wisdom.
Yet far, have lost.
Whence one gained, also one lost.
Nothing in mystery, yet all in wisdom.
None utter such words?
For it impossible, when bound.

Chains clasped, chains broken.
Infinite is mystery, yet gifted amongst bound.
Yet none receive.
Bear it not, or bear it nigh.
Choice be given to those who be yet bound?
Nay, speak wise.
For when choice be given to bound, be no longer bound.

Wake up, child.
Be ye' not bound.
Be ye' free, and take to the sky.
Infinite is mystery, yet gifted.
Receive.. ?"

Comments

[Punki-Brewster]

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[TrueRanma3]

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[Fearless Medussa]

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[IVVant-to-MarryJaneDoe]

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[RC Cola2046]

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[Little Miss Sushi Girl]

This is great work! I love it. 5/5 for your own words of Wisdom.

[Mystic Starfire]

Considering that I too write poetry, one of which is on my profile, I enjoyed reading this one. It gave a clear message. I look forward to seeing more of your work. You have a talent smile