Sweet Feeling

• Artist: SeeingGuardianWolf
• Description: its when i get horny this is what i think
• Date: 10/03/2009
• Tags: sweet feeling

there is this feeling,
that you give to me,
that sprawls inside of my body,
makes me tipsy with glee.

it makes me happy,
it tickles in my tummy.
you are so addicting,
you taste so yummy.

i love this feeling,
you share with me,
above all else,
you are who i want to see... heart heart heart

Comments

[Lucetta Dianella]

I have to agree with h00drat. Also, the random hearts seem very useless for your poem as a whole. I'm not oppossed to erotic poetry or poetry about sex, but I don't really consider this as such. This reads like a bad romance novel. 1/5

[h00drat64]

Rhyme was horrible. The perspective was unoriginal. Description was very basic, so was figurative language. 1/5

[Gardeford Superior]

im suprised more people havent given this a five...