Question

• Artist: Kara Nami
• Description: its a poem i have had published.. but i want some feed back on it...
  its very personal and from a rough time in my life.
  please ignore and slang or mispells
• Date: 10/04/2009
• Tags: question

What do you do when the people who love you, do nothing but destroy you?

Do you smile and nod your head and pretend?

Pretend that your fine when your hurting inside, or wait till the end of the day when you can let the tears fall down your face?

Do you lock it inside and pray till you die that there really is a greater good outside?

And the pain you feel inside will go away before you die?

Beleaving the tears you've cried will dry up without destroying the inside?

That the tears and pain they've caused will be tenfold apon them?

What do you do?

Walk away from it all?

And hope that in the end, it wont come back and hurt you one last time?

What really can you do before it's your time to die?

Comments

[Kara Nami]

thanks ^)^ i think everyone at least one time can. though i will always hope that that isn't the case

[Misunae]

I can actually relate to this, so it makes it all the more better than if i couldnt. But yah 5/5