Ugly Girl

• Artist: Zombie Kebab
• Description: Just a poem about a girl who commits suicide... and a deep truth someone faces about herself and if she continues the way she is going what might happen to her.
• Date: 10/05/2009
• Tags: ugly girl

Ugly Girl Screams
Look at me, look at me
Take a long glance, what do you see
Ugly Girl, she looks in the mirror
All she sees is ugliness
All she feels is sadness
Ugly Girl screams, into the night
At her life, and her fate
Blood drips down, from a steely knife
Ugly Girl falls into darkness
They keep Ugly Girl, keep her out of the papers
They hold counseling, no students go though
But at the memorial, some kdis go
To get out of school, or to ask why
Even I don't know
I think of Ugly Girl, later that night
This is when I wake up, full of fright
I look in the mirror, all a dream
Except Ugly Girl, stares back at me

Comments

[Monjong-wer]

like ProfessorKC said, it is a start (a good start), continue with the good work and some day you might even be famous!!

[ProfessorKC]

You know, there is something here that's good. It's a start. It needs more abruptness to take it to the next level and I think stanza organization is the key. Nice effort.