Fading

• Artist: DDrox316
• Description: i wrote this today actually in CVS Pharmacy X) but really it could be about more than one person i know, and thats actually really sad.
  wow. my whole life is just a mess up. i need a major re-do. i don't know what exactly i'd do differently, but I hope that other people wish they could re-do the things they did to hurt me </3
  (notice the multiple crosses in the broken heart at the end of the poem)
  oh, and ironic how i write poems all the time because i'm going to fail english class! yay! :'(
• Date: 10/06/2009
• Tags: fading friendship heart breaking dead

October 6 2009 3:23 pm

Why is this happening
Why are you doing this
You've got me worrying
It's all just a misunderstanding
My heart
is breaking
You were my first friend
But please I don't want this,
I don't want our
I don't want our friendship to end
But if this is where
Fate meant us to part
I just want you to know
You'll always have a place
in my heart <//3 **broken**

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

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Arrrk! I love i love smile 5/5
I really don't know why i'm excited, but aaawww!

[Caesura Caelum]

i got your message, and thanks, i just rated, i thought it was wonderful, and from the sounds of it, you might really enjoy some of my poems as well, check out "Yeah, it's true" "Better left alone" and "Lost chance" in that order if you would, it makes more sense... anyways, thank you, and the best of luck to you ^^

[Charply]

hey sweetie <3
its beautifous. ( beautiful = geooorgeouse XDD)
btw, u wanna check out my gallery? I post daily journals there.

here the link.

http://hanakari-chan.deviantart.com/