Sleepless Nights

• Artist: ThatsWhatiiSaid
• Description:
• Date: 10/16/2009
• Tags: sleepless nights

Another sleepless night
I'm staring at the ceiling
I can hear him fighting with her
for no good reason
If I had my way
I'd corner him and say

Put yourself in her position
All she needs is recognition
Love's not enough when you say it
Don't you know you've gotta mean it
Screwing up the best thing ever
Is something you'll regret forever

Comments

[DDrox316]

I like it a lot (:, but I think maybe you should change the -in endings to -ing? (like screwin to screwing?) i don't know, that's what I would do
also, I don't know if I like the "still" in the 2nd line. maybe you could do without it?
another suggestion: change
"i can hear him fighting
with her for no good reason" to
"I can hear him fighting with her
for no good reason" (I think that this way makes more sense, flows better.