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Contestant number one, come on down!
Because, you are now a player on:
“Break her heart
And make her cry
Break it quick
And watch her die.”
You can easily win this; with your pretentious smile and heart of gold.
(And by gold, I mean that s**t that turned your finger green)
Easy Right?
Especially for you.
You raised her hopes with flowers and candy hearts and a bittersweet lie of a hopeful tomorrow.
A kiss, a hug, you’re on a roll
Round one to the liar.
Then you turned your back and ignored her every other call.
And with your condescending air, you lay down the lowest blow
“I never really loved you anyway”
One tear, a sob. A Victory!
Round Two to the Betrayer
When she’s down, raise your fist in an egotistical way and strike her. Date the best friend and strip her of every love she has ever known.
One more cut a little blood…. Will it ever be enough?
Round three to the backstabber
(You’re so very close, just a little bit further)
Flaunt your love in front of her. Give her a constant reminder of what she can’t have.
The blade is raised (give her a kiss on the cheek)
The blade is descending (turn your back on the scene)
The blade is in motion (you never really cared)
You Win!
- by Vulcan Enterprise |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/17/2009 |
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- Title: Game Show
- Artist: Vulcan Enterprise
- Description: A Game Show, With A Disasterous End
- Date: 10/17/2009
- Tags: game show
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Comments (3 Comments)
- areyououthere - 10/21/2009
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and finally, the last stanza just make it about how the guy is so obnoxious and glorifies his "victory" (again, in that game-show-host style) and you have yourself quite a unique poem!
the line "You win!" doesn't add anything really because we don't know what is "won" OR "lost" really.
if you want more, post in the OP/L (Original Poetry/Lyrics) forum, and you may become a great poet one day. - Report As Spam
- areyououthere - 10/21/2009
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Date the best friend and strip her
of every love she has ever known.
strike the second line with a better one, and leave the first one as is. and this line:
One more cut a little blood
don't go there; it gets into the "emo" poetry and you don't want that. - Report As Spam
- areyououthere - 10/21/2009
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condescending air
that line could use more description in the style of a game-show-host.
and if you compared to something very low the part where it says "the lowest blow" you will strengthen that part - Report As Spam