Tears

• Artist: sparkle vampire kitty
• Description: this poem shows the truth in life.
• Date: 10/17/2009
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Tears!
They are truth.
They are freedom.
They are revealers of pain.
Tears!
They collect and cuddle.
They come when we fear.
They come when we smile.
Tears!
They can over come us.
They show are emotions.
They are human-made raindrops.
They are tears!

Comments

[babybear000]

you might want to change are to our in "they show are emotions" but it's pretty good i agree with kurai diasuke 3/5 and i want to see more

[Kurai Diasuke]

it was pretty good 3/5 worth reading, i hope to see more from you in the future. When you have the chance could you read mine?