.Love

• Artist: 3oh3_tmnt_cobraconda
• Description: Another poem my friend shannon wrote.
  tell me what you think.
• Date: 10/31/2009
• Tags: love

He told her He loved her.
that he needed her and cared for her.
He said he can't live with out her.
Walkin down the road she did.
She saw him with another girl.
She thought he loved her,
She thought he was right for her.
She thought he would never do this to her.
But she was wronge.
Now she is hurt and He still doesnt no she knows.
what pain he brought apond her little heart.
She sits up cryin in her pillow,
wondering why he would do this to her.
She wrote him a note explainin everything
and that was the last anyone heard from her.

Comments

[Tagga]

@love_is_moosic:
That is not irony. That is a coincedence. Irony is when the outcome of an event is different from expectations. For instance, if the male from the poem was named Truth, then his lies would be irony.

Now to the point, it was a good poem. Remember to use spell check next time, and that every stanza begins with a capital letter.

[TranquilAwakening]

...wow ironic...that pretty much just happpen too me...