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A scattered dream is like a far-off memory
A far-off memory which you can never reach
A barrier stops you from getting this memory
A barrier which you can never breach
The barrier had its purpose
To prevent you from getting your dream
Filled with enemies with their dark purpose
To take what is truly yours, your dream
What you must do is fight
You need strength, will and determination
You can fight for your right
Put all your words into action
Don't let darkness overcome your being
Let light empower your being
- by battledarkness4 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/12/2009 |
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- Title: Scattered Dream
- Artist: battledarkness4
- Description: For those familiar with Kingdom Hearts, yes i copied the start but did not copy the rest of it.... Forgive me about this... But overall this poem is about Kingdom Hearts.... Please comment nicely... and rate what you think must be the rating....
- Date: 11/12/2009
- Tags: scattered dream
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Comments (7 Comments)
- thetoastmeister - 05/06/2010
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Awesome!
is this from the first one or the second? - Report As Spam
- EbbysArtAccount - 04/06/2010
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-I must add this to my favorites >:3
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- battledarkness4 - 04/05/2010
- THANKS GUYS!
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- Haiizel Nut - 04/05/2010
- I love it (: Lol I was about to say I recognized the begining.
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- flamingriku001 - 03/07/2010
- Not bad. I like it. 5/5
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- aleksandra-music-love - 02/24/2010
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Lol, even though it's about Kingdom Hearts (which I don't know much about..), it still made me think about the things we should be doing in life.. smile
Fantastic poem by the way. I really like the adjectives and the words you used to make the lines rhyme.. 5/5 biggrin - Report As Spam
- vincent_pimp_kid- - 02/19/2010
- Hm... Since it's about kindom hearts Which is awesome and one of my favorite games ill rate it a 5/5. biggrin , It reminds me of it now.
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