I Was

• Artist: mikeskiboshski
• Description: Sorry about the language.
• Date: 12/05/2009
• Tags: song lyrics rock pumpkin buggy

You drain me like a toilet,
When you flush me down when I’m drowning s**t.
I try to fight against it,
But the current pulls me along with it.
You treat me like a baby,
Doing everything for me till I go out on my own.
You loved me like I was you baby,
Now I’m out here on my own.

Show me what all were about,
Before my time runs out.
Before I have no place to go,
Show me why I am alone.
I look like a beautiful buggy with my horses drawn.
But, I am just a gutted pumpkin left out on the lawn.

You held me like a bear,
But, I suffocated when you held me so dear.
I let you hold me like a bear,
Now I’ll never let you near.
You loved me like a brother,
But you loved just seemed to cover.
I loved you like my lover,
But everything seemed to smother.

Show me what all were about,
Before my time runs out.
Before I have no place to go,
Show me why I am alone.
I look like a beautiful buggy with my horses drawn.
But, I am just a gutted pumpkin left out on the lawn.

Comments

[kamahaazi]

The language isn't the problem. Unfortunately, for this song to be any good in my opinion, it would need to focus on it's sound.

[The Quotient of 42 and 0]

Nothing wrong with the language for me, I wouldn't imagine most people would have that problem. After all, if you used other words it wouldn't feel the same, an it's pretty good smile "But you loved just seemed to cover" thats the only thing that confused me, is it supposed to mean "But your love just seemed to cover"? 4/5 ^^