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Awake at night,
Eyes heavy with deceit,
The pain you caused me,
Ties the loose ends of – my feet
And hands, are numb from
The tip.
The pain you caused me,
Made a noose from your grip
Around my neck, I wear a locket.
Reminds me of the past when
You were my hero, dad,
Those days when I felt I could burst
Out, crying for you in the rain.
You abandoned us.
The pain you caused me,
Marked the end of your marriage and
The remains of friendship,
Lie sickly in bed.
The pain you caused me,
Never eases or drifts off
To sleep, with a mind so fragile
As mine is impossible,
The pain you caused me,
My “hero”,
Is called murder.
- by ThisIsMyDeathbed_x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2009 |
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- Title: Heros are evil
- Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
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Description:
Weell, just err... Yeah. SImple theme. A hero who turned out to be not who you thought he was. I wrote it when i was angry at my dad, and I got inspired by the song Perfect by Simple Plan. If you haven't hear it, listen to it. It's awesome :)
Anyway, enjoy and rate. the usual. Oh, and comment ;) I LOVE CRITISISM! - Date: 12/05/2009
- Tags: heros evil pain heartache
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Comments (5 Comments)
- King of Trash - 01/07/2010
- The Pain! The Anguish! OH YOU Must have been really angry with your dad... Another 5/5 My dear... excellent work...
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 12/13/2009
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We have matching hair <3
If you think that, then you really gotta do something to stop it. I'm not an advise agency, but seriously, you should tell adults and all that, if you mean the literal meaning. The metaphorical meaning is emotional torture. eitherway, both is bad. talking is the best weapon in the world heart - Report As Spam
- the hikage princess - 12/13/2009
- did u know ii always think that my dad will do this any day???
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 12/10/2009
- It's metaphorical. The whole lot of it
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- DDrox316 - 12/06/2009
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this is sad sad
I like how the dad not only abandons the girl, but he is also a murderer..... its a twist i didnt expect - Report As Spam