Once Upon a Time: part 1

• Artist: Sayber Amston
• Description: I was having one of my mental break-downs when I wrote this. Everything kinda just clicked and I realized what was happening.... I hate it when that happens. XP
  
  The original title is: Once Upon a Time, in a place called, "The Land of Opportunity."
  
  Saddly, I couldn't fit the whole sonnet or the whole title. So I guess I'll be submitting it in seperate portions. This one right here is PART 1.
  
  hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
  
  poetry (c) to me
• Date: 12/11/2009
• Tags: onceuponatime

title: Once Upon a Time, in a place called "The Land of Opportunuty."

PART: 1

I go to Wal-mart one night, the usual stop for the usual items. I browse about among the shelves stocked with food of all sorts.

It was one of those nights when you have nothing better to do except to go to Wal-mart thinking you need something when you don't need anything; not anything that can be found in any store at least.

A night when all of a sudden you have a revelation and Time begins to stand still.

And as I walked down aisle by aisle, it happened.

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this isn't actually a sonnet. this might help you: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonnet