Crime

• Artist: TheNewLibrarian
• Description: My first post. It's a religious poem. Enjoy
• Date: 12/12/2009
• Tags: crime jesus died sins forgive

Crime by Heathbar Snail

Jesus did something
That we cannot forgive.
He died on the cross
So that we could live.

He was accused of
A crime not committed,
Just to erase
Our sins not admitted.

Now it doesn’t matter
Who loses or wins.
With love and devotion
He died for our sins.

Comments

[Gazma]

Quite a religious poem...I'm not sure I agree with the "we cannot forgive" part, but I think you meant well by it. I think this one deserves a 4/5.