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The Qualities of Death
Death is when your loved ones must depart
Death is when all must die, however smart.
Death is when great minds are defeated,
Death is when all is obliterated.
And Death, this void, this curse, this spell,
Will send all beings to the reaches of Hell.
And death, this forsaken, this horrific fault,
Will bring all lives to a meaningless halt.
But there is hope in Death's dreaded mirth,
Which comes in the form of joyful rebirth.
So this is the period when Death is bested,
And all people's desire to live is tested.
- Title: The Qualities of Death
- Artist: Eretico
- Description: Just a poem I wrote for fun a while ago. I read it to my Language Arts class, and everybody seemed to like it. I could use feedback from everybody, but please explain why you think it is good or bad.
- Date: 12/20/2009
- Tags: qualities death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- King of Trash - 01/07/2010
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again excellent work... Death is only the beginning..
"Death's dreaded mirth..." That is a good line...
5/5... - Report As Spam
- silverwing2822 - 12/27/2009
- The last stanza is my favorite. Your rhyming skills are far greater than mine.
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- Eretico - 12/21/2009
- thnx UnwantedSurrender, thanks for saying why you like it
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- UnwantedSurrender - 12/21/2009
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I think it's good. c:
I like it because it's true and because of the way you word it.
Very nice. 5/5 - Report As Spam
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