Give up or Chase?

• Artist: snakesta
• Description: I chased after her, but in the end she wanted me to give up.
• Date: 01/04/2010
• Tags: sacrifice love confusion misunderstanding

All make the mistake,
of giving up,
letting them run,
not chasing after them,
although I did the opposite,
I've been running and running,
a marathon without an end,
I never gave up,
until you asked,
when it's my turn,
things go wrong of course,
perhaps not making the mistake,
was really the mistake,
what if I gave up,
what if I let her run,
would things be better,
would she be in my arms,
or would we not talk ever again,
I wonder over and over,
what was the true mistake,
to give up,
or to chase you,
I ask.

Comments

[BlueFheiry]

now it's becoming more like a story, coach..
maybe you should try having a well-deserved short story of your own.
a poem captures so little of words and feelings unspoken.. but then a short story may not do it justice... hmm.. in either way, i know you can surely express yourself well, and you'll still find joy with it. ^_^