My Eyes

• Artist: Gazma
• Description: This poem came after "Paths". It was going to at the end of said poem, but I decided to make it one all its own. I think my creative high was wearing off by the time I cranked this one out though. The feeling just isn't as strong in this one...
• Date: 01/24/2010
• Tags: eyes gate soul heart hate

See my eyes
See the gate
A thing I've come
To despise and hate
But here's a heart
Cracked and frayed
Wishing someone
Would take it away
Different pieces
Of my soul
Different pieces
As part of a whole
The gate stays open
Waiting for one
The heart is broken
Waiting for one
There is one
Let her come in
Are you the one
Who will get locked in?

Comments

[kera suki]

Keep working on your poetry. I too am still working on mine. Infact I took an English class a couple of years ago and I literally had him pulling out his hair, because I could not stay focused. I'm going to retake the class, maybe I'll pass this time.