Nothing

• Artist: tamiya kinder
• Description: just a poem that i wrote a couple of nights ago please tell me what you think.
• Date: 01/29/2010
• Tags: nothing

Nothing

It lays there in the corner
just staying there
doing nothing but
collecting dust.
glistening with a dull blackness.
and yet its colorful
and bright.
so fast
yet so slow.
staring off
in the distance.
it slowly but surely
becomes dust
as it fades away
into the night.

Comments

[is that a bear]

doesn't have to rhyme. just depends on how you write it. well done. well written. i love it.

[Metaphoric Rain]

Woah, I really like it! It's very well-written and, though it lacks consistent rhyming, it's still poetic enough of a poem to be good.