Just Friends

• Artist: Frozen Corruption
• Description: this girl just wants to be friends...im good with that.....i got bored and wrote this....comment/Rate? :)
• Date: 02/10/2010
• Tags: just friends

I hope you smile.
I hope you laugh.
Look into the future,
never the past.

I can't help but smile
because you're my friend.
I can tell you everything in my mind
from now through time's end.

When you smile,
I can't help but smile too.
Because all I need to make me happy,
Is for me to be with you.

Comments

[Dragonspun]

I'm going to give you 4/5 because it is a good little poem (I disagree with the one who thinks it needs to be longer... sometimes short can be sweet) but I felt the ending kind of dropped, ya know? It's a sweet ending as far as the words themselves go, but as it pertains to the poetry itself, it falls flat. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say here. Constructive criticism. Overall, good job. smile

[vv7722]

Like it! Finally a comforting poem on Gaia, thanks for sharing that. 4/5, it needs more length...