Heartache

• Artist: CaraBabie
• Description: This is a poem sort of thing about heartbreak and the longing for someone you can't have basically. Comments and Ratings welcome.
  
• Date: 02/11/2010
• Tags: heartache poem carababie

I cannot take living with all of the pain that envelopes me when you are with her
Especially when I am there
I cannot take the pain caused by you when you ignore me
I cannot live with such pain in my life
I will not
I need you because without you I am lost
But it is so hard to make you see this
You act like we are just friends
But I know we can be more
I am surprised I have not given up on you
But then I realise that I would feel empty if I did
All I need to stop this
Is for you to say three words to me
Mean them and then
I can be free of pain and happy once more

Comments

[Sancerre]

This poem is really choppy and difficult to understand due to its awkward wording and structure. Try to clean that up in order to make your point more clear

[CaraBabie]

i spelt realise the right way for people in the UK. I appreciate your comment.

[Cookie_Booger]

You miss-spelled "realize".
This for me, is a cliche poem, with love stories and jealousy.