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Towards the distance sky, sitting on the softness clouds
Looking downwards, and simply admiring the dazzling flowers,
Soon they will be scattered by the lonesome fire.
Nothing can be undone, only witnessing all with my sadden eyes,
Begging for some miracle, I pray for the almighty rain
To help them all, and I shall do the sacrifice.
Now that time is clicking, it's the begging of the sacrifice
With the aid of my friends; the clouds,
And now lending me a hand; the rain
I'll be able to once again admire those flowers.
It opens one single eye,
Glaring at me with much detested from the fire.
I'll not be afraid of the fire,
I now have a duty; my simple sacrifice.
Now watch me, with your beauty eyes
As I gather together with my clouds,
To be able to free you from your pain, dear flower
So don't cry, you'll disappear with the rain.
Don't get wasted away by the rain,
Don't get lost in the paradise of the fire,
Believe that you are not alone, my flower.
I will do all the sacrifice
Now I leap forward and attack beside the clouds,
Forgive me, your witnessing this with your innocent eyes.
I won't allow you to have disgraceful eyes.
The revolution of darkness will be stopped by the rain,
The distorted and black smoke will be covered by the white clouds.
It won't hold back to kill with open wide arms of fire,
Each of his victims have been a waste of sacrifice.
I loved you, so the evil came for you, my flower.
I won't let him interfere with us, lovely flower,
I want to keep seeing you with my own eyes.
That when this ends, it wasn't a waste of my sacrifice.
Watering away, caused by the rain
The lonesome will die and give one last single spark of fire,
Slowly falling behind the shadows of the clouds.
Now the sacrifice has been done and my precious flower is safe,
Landing softly onto the clouds' surface, I close my eyes into consciousness.
By giving up my live to the rain, the dangerous fire is no longer here to harm you anymore.
- Title: Live On My Flower
- Artist: ShiroAi
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Description:
"No matter what danger your loved one may be at, won't you sacrifice yourself for love?"
This is my Sestina. The six words that end each of the lines of the first stanza are repeated in a different order at the end of lines in each of the subsequent five stanza. Just that the repeated words are un-rhymed, that's all. - Date: 03/17/2010
- Tags: love evil flowers clouds sacrifice
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Comments (2 Comments)
- lolANX44317YH - 03/17/2010
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Awww = ^ =
It's sad, but I did enjoyed reading it! I love the part of " I won't let him interfere with us, lovely flower," I do think is a wonderful line. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- iCupCakeKiss - 03/17/2010
- I like it. It's sweet how the cloud feel in love with the flower, it cute. I think this is a very cool poem.I think the mood gets progressively darker as it progresses, Good work. ^ ^
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