the bodies of feelings

• Artist: 123Irock123
• Description: this is just a little poem I wrote while I was board.. all about what embodies emotions, Hope you like it
• Date: 03/20/2010
• Tags: bodies feelings

if love is a river
then let it flow,
if love is a flower
let it grow
if love is the sun
then let it glow
Oh the power of love

if hate is a poison
let vile be the taste
if hate is plaque
be sure to use good paste
if hate is speed
be sure to slow the pace
Oh the horror of hate

if kindness is a gift
then always give it away
if kindness is a story
turn it into a play
if kindness is the wind
let it blow all day
Oh the pleasure of kindness

if joy is a birthday cake
share it with your friends
if joy is the longest summer
have fun, before it ends
if joy is a pet dog
enjoy the companionship it lends
Oh the greatness of JOY

thanks for reading xxx

Comments

[123Irock123]

awwww thanks, do u wanna b friends?

[alyssaizbeast]

this is the best poem i read so far&your poem actually has meaninq.

[123Irock123]

thanks!! this was just... as I said in my discription, this poem I wrote when I was board the other day

[Firekat Archer]

Comparing feelings to several different things is so cool! I also like that you put in not only good feelings, but hate, too!

[123Irock123]

thanks for the advice, I've updated it, hope you like it!!

[fdfdsdfdfdsa]

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