Death.

• Artist: Rusty Swingset
• Description: I had to write a poem for one of my classes. This is what I came up with. The theme was horror, death, etc.. Its all one, I just seperated it. Feel free to criticize my horrible peice of crap. x3
• Date: 03/31/2010
• Tags: death w00t

Death is everywhere
When you see it its like a chilling stare
It can catch you by surprise
And It can happen before your eyes

Death can come in your sleep
Death can also make you weep
As our lives come and go
When death will come no one knows

Comments

[L_MTmule]

Its actually a nice little piece. Kind of an overused topic, but what isn't these days? Only grammar mistake is your spelling on come in the next to last line. "As your life comes and goes" Honestly I believe that line would sound a little better, and a little more all around, if it was written as "As Our lives come and go" but what you have works as well. Overall you did a very nice job, Mobile Kittay 8]

[Rusty Swingset]

w00t.