Winter's Dance

• Artist: Replay Alpha
• Description: This is a re-post void of christmas, it instead focuses on how a once autumn night becomes winter. I wish I could have entered the holiday contest, but I care not, as long as I am catching someone's attention. I hope you all like it, and for whatever reason you don't, just don't bother commenting it will most likely be deleted. Where I am quite happy with critiques, it is how it's said that determines it's worth. I usually don't dwell on it, just keep writing and having fun in doing so. ^_____^
• Date: 04/10/2010
• Tags: late contest entry winter dance

The Northern goddess is now awake, quick to shelter you must take. What once was green turned golden brown, now lays to rest under frozen ground. She dances in the night and holding true to her title, she freezes time so it forever stays idle.

As the bristling chill arose, the creek, river, and lake thus froze, she then took to the skys and looked through eagle eyes, her creation from above looked of quite the wonderland, truly now all would see that winter was at hand.

She laid on the clouds above, overflowing with both hapiness and love, reactions from those who would see her art, seemed to warm her frost filled heart. She made quite sure that all was nigh before she danced again, to defrost time and bid adieu for this was now the end.

An honor to behold as she tucked the world in white, puting blankets of snow over us then kissing us good night. Her kiss sent shivers, yet told us it was time, that she'd be back again next year and so I end this rhyme.
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~By: Anthony G. R. B. (Hiltshank)

Comments

[Mizuki Kanamashiru]

The one below me IS a hobo. C: Beautiful, I loved it! ^w^ 5/5, rate back please? C:

[ll-Red_Head-ll]

writing is not fun at all wy would you rather do writing then go on the computer?