A Painful Love So Easy To Cure

• Artist: luv_lil_liz_
• Description: Well, this is my first time writing love poetry (if this is considered poetry). But i wrote it because i was feeling depressed about not finding anyoe to love. Hope you ppl like it.
• Date: 04/29/2010
• Tags: love pain agony suffering

Loving you is worse than misery and pain
Even when you just talk to me I feel your a temptation
Your like poison killin me from the insides,
Slowly and painfully
At the feel of your hands I feel a weird sensation
When you get near, when I feel your touch
Just havin you near me is a torture
Everytime you whisper my name
Everytime i feel a tingling sensation
Crawling all over my skin,
Even when you just call out my name
This a pain you give me
Can't you make it go away
Take it all away
All this suffering and pain
You know all you have to do is whisper those three words
Softly and slowly into my ear
Saying those three words
"I love you"
You will make this pain
This suffering
This agony
Go all away

Comments

[VacantGaze]

it is poetry hun all thou has to do to make poetry is to show an image maybe a peice of thou's heart so i say good job smile