Laying in the grass

• Artist: When we die we mourn
• Description: just something i wrote plz comment i need all the criticism
• Date: 05/05/2010
• Tags: laying grass poem

A lunatic laying in the grass. Lost in hallucinations of the past. All the days that have long passed. All the lies, and all the laughs. The hopes that died, the dreams that crashed, and the loves he thought would forever last. All the time he let slip through the cracks, all the times he broke his back , and all the things you put him through. He did it all for you, "i love you" the last words he would speak that day when you rose and walked away...........

Comments

[blonde_hobbit]

thats was good a little confusing i'll amit but very good