I tried..

• Artist: Doctor the Sixth
• Description: I new type of poem I am writing, the middle parts can change out of each other, first part, one middle, and the last part should make a sentence. Rate and comment
• Date: 05/06/2010
• Tags: tried

I tried.. 
..To help..
..To save..
..To stop..
..You

I tried to.. 
..Free..
..Protect..
..You from him

I was..
..Not there when I should have..
..Hurt when I saw you with him..
..Too dumb to see when it happened..
..So he caused the pain

He.. 
..Attack..
..Harmed..
..Destroyed..
..Your heart.

I just need you..
..To believe..
..To stand up..
..To end it..
..And I will help you all the way. 

Comments

[Forever In Time]

It makes me want to cry. I guess thats a good thing. It means its very touching... I can relate to it.

[Rkah]

Its very creative and I like it alot. Lots of emotion, I like it smile

[XxKitty_of_DeathxX]

i like it its very creative. the poem in its self is just amazing i really like it. when i read it i actually could feel how you must have when you wrote it. its really good 5/5