the begining of possession

• Artist: thantoseman
• Description: something i thought of a couple years ago, finely decided to submit it for review.
  please comment appropriately but say what you think so i can possibly make it better
• Date: 05/10/2010
• Tags: begining posetion

Oh! this pain as he lies tossing, turning struggling for breath his arms flailing, trying to stop his assailant who's hands squeeze his throat, who's hands rip something from his body, gripping, tearing, fighting, screaming, gasping, panicking and he wakes once more no, not awake deceased he dresses with no expression he leaves with no comment his body moves, but his soul...his soul! it has been taken in the night as this demon inside him drives him to kill!!!

Comments

[thantoseman]

thanks

[The Beauty Of Lies]

Thats awesome i wish what i write could be as good as that.