i am...

• Artist: 144xXLou-LouXx144
• Description: it was my poetry final and it apparently scared my friend guy (yes his name is guy)
• Date: 05/21/2010
• Tags: lonelydeathpainhate

I am a mouse
Scared and confused
I wonder what the cat might do
I hear the cat sleeping
Dreaming of my demise

Outting pressure on me
Untill I pop
Is how he feels I must be taught

I hear the cat wanting to pounce
I want to run
but im at a loss

I am a mouse

I pretend to be tough and strong
But the days are just so hard
I feel unwanted
A pest
I touch the trap
And then it it snaps!
It hurts and I can feel my life slipping away
I cry as I realize I lost the game
The game of life

I am a mouse

I understand that I am low and people hate me for the things I’ve stole
I say I’m sorry
But they don’t care
They set the traps out anyways
To hear me weap
They enjoy my pain
They celebrate it

I am dead

I dream of a even world where I can be who I am
To not be jugde
To be understood

I am a mouse

cold and lifeless
once fighting but now just tired of trying
so here I lay taking the pain
day after day

I am a mouse

I am me

Comments

[The_Bunny_King_Of_Love]

Deep and very open to what happens to a little mouse and made it to where you feel the same. Like you yourself is that mouse. Your words and your emotions seam to show through this as well, and wish that others didn't judge you, hate you, and want you dead. All this i love and all this i shred tears. Great and sad together.

[Trusae]

That was interesting o 3o I enjoyed it

[Liek Hipstrr]

Amazing, Love(:

[xChibi Cannibalx]

poem = +4
having a friend named guy = +1
5/5 total