Living among the memories

• Artist: Cahsper
• Description:
• Date: 05/29/2010
• Tags: living among memories

I live for the future,
but am stuck in the past.
It is dark,
cold, and painful.
Back here, living,
among the memories,
of before.

Comments

[StrawberryMind]

I enjoyed this poem very much! Simplistic, yet tormenting. Nice combo!

Only problem is the spacing, it isn't dramatic enough.

Perhaps, "It is dark, cold, and painful.
Back here,
Living among the memories of before."

Good job over all though!