Lonely

• Artist: Uncrowned Sins
• Description: It's a poem i wrote when i was lonely.
• Date: 05/30/2010
• Tags: lonely

This Lonely Night
Flies Through My Sight
I felt like flying a kite
but it wasnt that light

Lonely days
finds the ecape maze
it seems loving you
is hard to do

I meet a guy name conely
now i'll never be lonely

Comments

[Qwiette]

A few interesting phrases. You should take a poetry class. I noticed reliance on easy rhymes. Sometimes the best stuff doesn't rhyme. I've been published here and there. I've written over 200 poems, and a few are actually good. I just discovered this part of Gaia, so I looked around and couldn't resist adding my two cents when I saw the word, "Comment." Keep writing................................................on.

[Atheshya]

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