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he says fight and fight,
she sees no hope in sight.
she feesl guilty of her past
and now she is stuck here in a cast.
left motionless, she gives up her will to live
but then life he gives
his to hers
there is nothing more.
he is willing to give his own life to save hers
what more could she ask for?
as the process begins
he gives his final grin.
now she awakens from her slumber
she can't speak but only mummer.
she forgot about him giving her his life.
then she strifes.
she is wondering where her love has gone.
he has finally gone home.
now she wonders was it worth it.
was it worth going through that ****.
- by Dinosaurisherfishy Rawr |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/01/2010 |
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- Title: the battle of life and death
- Artist: Dinosaurisherfishy Rawr
- Description: point out the positives and negatives of this poem please. I want to see how much more work needs to be done.
- Date: 06/01/2010
- Tags: battle
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