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Two worlds collide in
In a beautiful embrace
Fast growing passion
One sinner One saint
Switch places for a night
The saint becomes his sinner
And the sinner becomes her saint
He makes her his for the night
And she lays claim to him
Their bodies come close
He is against her
And she is without fear
He stays his place
Above her clothes
While she delves below
In her devilish want
His hand finds her
Above the waist
(Since he is the saint tonight)
Her prized possession
They go no further
For she is still a saint
And so is he for now
Morning comes
They lay together
He the sinner
And she the saint
Again in their rightful places
But the sinner is new
With a touch of sainthood
And the saint is battered
With a touch of the sinner
- Title: The Saint and Her Sinner
- Artist: AshKW
- Description: I think it explains itself. I hope you like it and for the love of God, PLEASE comment!
- Date: 06/16/2010
- Tags: saint sinner passion
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lt Crazymonky56789 -GMCC- - 06/27/2010
- nice
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 06/21/2010
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I really do love this piece. Keep writing, kiddo!
@Mythological: I really dont see what you mean. I think it flows rather well. Try reading at a different pace. - Report As Spam
- chair chat - 06/20/2010
- It doesn't seem like there is any flow or rhythm. Though I understand the main point of the poem, it seems to be without organization. Some parts are chunky as well and don't fit with the other lines (ln 4 - ln 8 for example)
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- bloodie_roses - 06/17/2010
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whoa.
Thats really good.
i would pay money for that.
and im not just sayin that cuz im the first commentor...
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