Take it in

• Artist: lost in my frozen dreams
• Description:
• Date: 06/20/2010
• Tags: take

Breath it in
Breath it out
Let it take control

Wear it out
Wear it in
But always reach your goal

Let it soak in
Or let it bleed out
Always remember your soul

Let the music in
And the words out
But life's not a never ending hole

It's a never ending LIGHT

Comments

[jth12550]

I liked it, it had a solid base, but I felt it lost its rythm in the last two stanzas.