The Love Within Us

• Artist: Mario the Davidic Hero
• Description: It's slightly short, but I reflected on this piece to think about relationships and romance, although I don't have a girlfriend at all. And I wish I would.... if only I could find the perfect girl for me in the real world....
• Date: 06/21/2010
• Tags: love within

The love within us is one
You and I, we were close bound
Our knots are about to be undone
And the love within us shall be found

My dearest one
You were pretty when I first met you
The way you look back towards me
Makes my whole day shining blue

Just who were you when I first saw you
Dazzling with beauty, shining with light
If we were to be united as one
I shall love you with all my might!

One bond stands in between us
The love fits well in the season of Spring
One glorious day, we will match the ring
To which I can bring, I must!

We shall never fade
As I am with you
If anyone can bring us together
It won't be me alone, but you too!

The love within us
Shall not fade, it will never
Bonds are growing between me and you
And we will be together, forever and ever

Comments

[EmmyMurphy]

so cute, so beautiful, so amazing, so fantastic!

5/5

[Beautiful Susan]

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[ICanHazPanda]

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[twilightfroggysings]

This is amazing!

[iToxicOreo]

o3o was it for princess peach?

[ChiquitaChacon]

beautiful(: 5/5

[xXOryuXx]

that's very sweet!! xD