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A constellation comet
A supernova star
Who knew your fingers
Coming close as angels breath
Upon the strings of your guitar
Could weave a magic circle
Where music and beauty live
Wouldn't you rather be by my side,
Weaving for me instead?
Letting our eyes exchange silent secrets
Stay, please don't leave
I wish to catch you
And hold you like the ocean
I wish to command you
As the goddess of your needs
Yet I smile as your fans scream.
Your world is so close yet, so far from mine
So dangerous but, so much your own
You may leave, go play for them
Let them see the you I have been shown
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- | Submitted on 06/24/2010 |
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- Title: Weaving Music
- Artist: out of controll
- Description: a poem i wrote for my BF...it won me a $1,000 scholarship so i thought i'd show people
- Date: 06/24/2010
- Tags: weaving music love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- TheGraceOfFlutterbies - 07/06/2010
- Love It biggrin
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- epic_ninja_kid - 06/29/2010
- good
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- Cherry Blossom Writings - 06/28/2010
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Typically I can almost always find something wrong with whatever I read, but I can't in this >.<
It was extremely well written and the language you used was amazing and unique. I'm so glad this didn't turn out like typical poems written for lovers. It was very creative and now one of my top favorite reads. 5/5
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- SKA-BOOM - 06/24/2010
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awesome!! im so happy for you!
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