My Moon

• Artist: totallytwilight193
• Description: ---Read---
• Date: 06/28/2010
• Tags: moon

If I am the sun,
Then who is my moon,
Because my day shift is over soon.

The last one said,
"Count to 61",
I was up to 40,
And almost done,
I was up to more midnight fun,
But I opened my eyes to the midnight sun.
My moon ran away,
So it was time for the day,
I wonder if my heart,
Will ever be okay.

I was hiding in the east,
And moving to the west,
Shining real hard,
But not shining my best.

I can light the day,
But can't light the night,
I need someone to make things alright.
Maybe someday,
Maybe somenight,
I will find the one to make things right.


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Comments

[totallytwilight193]

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[xXx_Universe_xXx]

this is much better than all those other poems on spotlight that don't belong there. I like how it is about cosmological objects lighting up the celestial sphere to allow life on earth to be possible

[totallytwilight193]

biggrin Thank You!!! Please tell your friends about my work!!! smile )

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

this one stunned me! how very nice, especially the picture that fits the poem, well! 5/5

[TheGraceOfFlutterbies]

I love This Your A Good Writer. This Amazed Me (: And Helped Me A Little So Thank You ^^ I Write As Well ^^