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A piercing scream into the night
As An angel takes it's flight
Brought down By Darkened chains
Causing nothing but shattering pain
A fight begins for the angels life
Trying hard to find the light
Begging all to rescue her
Though none can hear the terrored words
An evil laugh comes from the man
Who takes the angel in his hand
He whispers words of love and joy
She can see through his decoy
And on she struggles for the flight
That she believes will save her life
But chains around her pull so tight
She cannot breathe, she cannot cry
A wing is freed Though not enough
And it's soon pulled from the cuff
Holding it to the angels back
She starts to cry he starts to laugh
With but one wing the angel falls
No other angel hears her calls
Down towards the fiery earth
With chains and pain no sign of mirth
All in seconds the angel is dead
Trying to fly but falling instead
No one will notice the missing girl
She is gone from this world
- by Mistress-Amethyst |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/13/2010 |
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- Title: The fallen Angel
- Artist: Mistress-Amethyst
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Description:
An angel struggles to fly, but is pulled and broken by an evil man.
The poem is based on a time last year when a man stole my innocense from me. - Date: 07/13/2010
- Tags: fallen angel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xI run with scissorsx - 07/29/2010
- i agree with arobia!!!
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- Arobia - 07/27/2010
- Wow, this is beautiful. 5/5 and favs. You shouldwrite more *nods head*
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- Mistress-Amethyst - 07/25/2010
- Hi Kitty! ^.^
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- Mistress-Amethyst - 07/25/2010
- Thank you all! I'm glad you like it, and I'm glad you could visualize it. That was my intention smile
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- xI run with scissorsx - 07/24/2010
- This poem put me in a state of aw it was magnificent in a dark and haunting way. I too could visualize it. Great job 5/5and faves ps my kitten says hi >^.^<
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- Theatrum Est Diligo - 07/19/2010
- That was hauntingly beautiful. Your writing style is very unique, and I imagine many people can relate to this. I found myself visualizing it while I read. Congrats on writing such a magnificent piece. 5/5
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- Cassidy mcclellan - 07/14/2010
- U did a really great job, i loved it, Fav's & 5/5
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