Face the Darkness

• Artist: The Mad Land Monarch
• Description: I wrote this song for an art contest that's coming up when school starts. Plz tell me what you think . The theme for the contest is "Together we can...". I'll accept all kinds of criticism.
• Date: 07/31/2010
• Tags: face darkness friendships separation reunion

I'm stuck in the shadows
Of friendships separated
I'm searching for the ones I lost
A long, long time ago

And I know
That I'll see them all again one day
And when I see them
I'll say...

Together
We can fight the demons of our past
Together
We can beat all our deepest fears
For together
We can face the darkness

I'm searching for all of those
That've seemed to disappear
I'm looking along the edge of darkness
I can't go in alone

And I know
That I'll see them all again one day
And when I see them
I'll say...

Together
We can fight the demons of our past
Together
We can beat all our deepest fears
For together
We can face the darkness

Together
We can fight the demons of our past
Together
We can beat all our deepest fears
For together
We can face the darkness

We can face the darkness
We can face the darkness

Comments

[~The Random Fairie~]

Pro's: Not wrist-slasher-ey. Very good structure. Decent vocabulary.
Con's: It would be EXCELLENT if you made it a song story, if you made small comments like "I know I lost you so long ago, but now I hope, to see you once again"
Just a couple things. Y'know.
ON TO OTHER SONGS OF YOURS.
Also, I thought of a good tune for this, I'll sing it tommorrow for you, go to the choir room at lunch for it.

[Gimmie_Cookiez]

awwww its supper good

[Death Of The Killer]

NICE. biggrin

[Graceful Sprit]

awww..sweet

[Ritsu-fangirl]

this is cool i like it it gives hope for lost things