The Last Piece

• Artist: KuroKageHane
• Description: This is a poem I made while thinking of some one I really want to meet in real life.
  
  Please rate and comment. :3
• Date: 08/14/2010
• Tags: last piece puzzle something heart

Hair, eyes, face...
Something I need to see.

Cries, laughs, voice...
Something I need to hear.

Appearance, sound, reaction...
Something I need to know.

Emotions, fears, sadness...
Something I need to mend.

Joys, smiles, tears...
Something I missed out on.

Love, hearts, soul...
Something that's as one.

Life, death, you...
The final piece of my puzzle.

Comments

[mecha_may_dia]

i feel like this would translate well as spoken word poetry.
it reads more like prose, though.

[CaronSscott]

this is so adorable 5/5 smile

[Stroms_Shadow]

It's really great.

[Shiro the Elven Wolf]

life is short, time is short, but ull meet this person

4/5 but definitley good work