Love Peom

• Artist: SteamBeamer
• Description: its a love peom i wrote of top of my head
• Date: 08/18/2010
• Tags: love peom

Three words
Fill my racing mind
Leave me breathless
Lost in time

Three words
Fill my endless dreams
Repair my heart
Mend the seams

Three words
Fill my open ears
Flutter 'pon your tongue
Wash away my dark fears

Three words
Fill my joyful life
With you by my side
My beautiful wife

Three words
Fill your heart too
Three words pronounced
I love you

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Comments

[Hyper Shion]

I liked it. Not very well written, but it has good descriptions.
Begging in arenas gets you nowhere. 2/5

[Shrouded Nightmares]

Its okay. I give you a 2 because of this line Three words
Fill my open ears
Flutter 'pon your tongue
Wash away my dark fears
And you want people to donate.